Can u tell me if this gud or not

i wrote this for the guy that i love. There more way i feel but i am afraid it might be to long.

My love for you is so hard to describe but I want you to know
How I really feel about you I think it's time u should know.
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

When you tell me you love me I get this kind of feeling
That I never got with any other guy that I know.
That feeling is like so hard to describe but I will try
For you, it's like butterflies in my stomach flying all over
In my stomach and then this big smile comes on my face just
To know that you love me too and you care for me.
I know you're not by my side but I feel like you are when we talk
And the way I talk to you it's like I can tell you anything hoping that
You will understand and you that's one thing I love abut you if need
Help with something you try your best to help and plus you actually
Listening to me not like all the other guys I know.
Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a song,
Love is what I feel for you,
Each and every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is a great emotion,
That keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart,
My body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving,
Like a love I can't control,
So remember when I first started to talk to you,
I love you with all my heart,
And I have poured my entire soul into you,
Right from the very start.
That's how my love is but there is more and more feels every
Day that I know you.