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Bart22 Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can U See The Thesis here? or am I stupid?
this is the first paragraph of my essay which is (according to my teacher) outrageous. could u please look at it and tell me honestly whether u can or cannot see the thesis and the blueprint there?
"Why are entrance exams necessary on english philology"
Entrance examinations are stressful, difficult and sometimes unfair as for the reason that very often the passing or not depends on one's luck. Be that as it may, entrance examinations cause very important effects, such as: eliminating people without basic knowledge, checking the knowledge of those who pass, and preparing the students-to-be for similar examinations in the future.
this is supposed to be a cause and effect essay...could u tell me whats wrong with it and how can i improve it? please!!!!!!!!
im really depressed. this is my fourth draft yet my teacher is not satisfied at all.
i hate writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh and thx for your help
Bart
"Why are entrance exams necessary on english philology"
Entrance examinations are stressful, difficult and sometimes unfair as for the reason that very often the passing or not depends on one's luck. Be that as it may, entrance examinations cause very important effects, such as: eliminating people without basic knowledge, checking the knowledge of those who pass, and preparing the students-to-be for similar examinations in the future.
this is supposed to be a cause and effect essay...could u tell me whats wrong with it and how can i improve it? please!!!!!!!!
im really depressed. this is my fourth draft yet my teacher is not satisfied at all.
i hate writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh and thx for your help
Bart
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Bart, I have already responded to a previous post but will also respond to this one. A few words before I answer you plea for help. Don't use the exclamation mark for emphasis.
- Bart, I have already responded to a previous post but will also respond to this one.
- A few words before I answer you plea for help.
- Don't use the exclamation mark for emphasis.
- " Writing is wonderful.
- The more of it you do, the more your hate will turn to love.
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Bart, I have already responded to a previous post but will also respond to this one. A few words before I answer you plea for help. Don't use the exclamation mark for emphasis. Use it correctly--only after a true exclamation, such as "Wait!" or "Stop the bus!"
It's sad that you "hate writing." Writing is wonderful. The more of it you do, the more your hate will turn to love. Please keep
It's sad that you "hate writing." Writing is wonderful. The more of it you do, the more your hate will turn to love. Please keep
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