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Guest Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing
Can u please help me in modifing my covering letter.
I am sarika from india. i would be really glad if someone would help me out to modify my covering letter for applying for a job.
Date:
From,
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Dear Sir,
Sub:- Application for the post of Administrative Coordinator.
Having come across your advertisement. I, the undersigned, grab this opportunity to offer myself as a candidate for the above post.
I am an efficient employee with over 4 years of experience in the corporate sector. As regards my educational qualifications, experience, etc. the attached bio-data of mine will speak for itself. Needless to say, I am always encouraged by new and challenging responsibilities and committed to contribute my share enthusiastically.
My most recent experience is as Administrative Coordinator in M/s. LGC Promochem India Pvt. Ltd.
In light of my following expertise. I am confident that you will find me adept for the post
? Strong administrative, organizational and above average verbal and written communication abilities. A highly effective team player that understands the value of working together towards a common goal.
? Sense of priority, Pleasing personality.
? Practice of high level contacts and correspondence
? Proficiency in Ms- Office
? Patient, mature, flexible, discreet, able to work under pressure.
? Proficiency in shorthand and typing
? Ability to handle multiple tasks and
? Open-minded and respectful of different cultures and their particular needs.
It is therefore my humble request to your goodself to kindly consider my application for which I shall ever be grateful to you. In conclusion, I feel, I have furnished all the necessary information in brief.
However, it is my pleasure to furnish any other information that you may require at the time of interview.
Thanking your and awaiting for your favorable orders.
Your Sincerely,
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Date:
From,
***
Dear Sir,
Sub:- Application for the post of Administrative Coordinator.
Having come across your advertisement. I, the undersigned, grab this opportunity to offer myself as a candidate for the above post.
I am an efficient employee with over 4 years of experience in the corporate sector. As regards my educational qualifications, experience, etc. the attached bio-data of mine will speak for itself. Needless to say, I am always encouraged by new and challenging responsibilities and committed to contribute my share enthusiastically.
My most recent experience is as Administrative Coordinator in M/s. LGC Promochem India Pvt. Ltd.
In light of my following expertise. I am confident that you will find me adept for the post
? Strong administrative, organizational and above average verbal and written communication abilities. A highly effective team player that understands the value of working together towards a common goal.
? Sense of priority, Pleasing personality.
? Practice of high level contacts and correspondence
? Proficiency in Ms- Office
? Patient, mature, flexible, discreet, able to work under pressure.
? Proficiency in shorthand and typing
? Ability to handle multiple tasks and
? Open-minded and respectful of different cultures and their particular needs.
It is therefore my humble request to your goodself to kindly consider my application for which I shall ever be grateful to you. In conclusion, I feel, I have furnished all the necessary information in brief.
However, it is my pleasure to furnish any other information that you may require at the time of interview.
Thanking your and awaiting for your favorable orders.
Your Sincerely,
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Top answer
Hmmm. Where is this job based? Is it in India or another country?
- Hmmm.
- Where is this job based?
- Is it in India or another country?
- To my British ear much of your letter is strangely phrased but I am aware that other cultures will express themselves in this way, so I am reluctant to point out where in case your language is correct for the context.
- In general though, I think you need to work on your 'bullet-points'.
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Hmmm.
Where is this job based? Is it in India or another country?
To my British ear much of your letter is strangely phrased but I am aware that other cultures will express themselves in this way, so I am reluctant to point out where in case your language is correct for the context.
In general though, I think you need to work on your 'bullet-points'. Each point sho
Where is this job based? Is it in India or another country?
To my British ear much of your letter is strangely phrased but I am aware that other cultures will express themselves in this way, so I am reluctant to point out where in case your language is correct for the context.
In general though, I think you need to work on your 'bullet-points'. Each point sho
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