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Omri123 Posted 21 years ago
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Can u help me correct these lines

...and whose ideas are still being implemented and more importantly are still being fought for worldwide nowadays. We believe that the ideas that sparked and were fought for during the French Revolution are still relevant...
  

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and whose ideas are still being implemented and more importantly are still being fought for worldwide nowadays. I don't think nowadays is relevant. If it is "still" being fought for, it must be happening nowadays, no?

  • and whose ideas are still being implemented and more importantly are still being fought for worldwide nowadays.
  • I don't think nowadays is relevant.
  • If it is "still" being fought for, it must be happening nowadays, no?
  • 2) We believe that the ideas that sparked and were fought for during the French Revolution are still relevant...
  • "sparked and were fought for" is repetitive?
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1) ...and whose ideas are still being implemented and more importantly are still being fought for worldwide nowadays.

I don't think nowadays is relevant. If it is "still" being fought for, it must be happening nowadays, no?

2) We believe that the ideas that sparked and were fought for during the French Revolution are still relevant...

"sparked and were fought for" i

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