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Train car Posted 9 years ago
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In continuation with the conversation on the GAPs in Agile teams based on Engineering capacity and AR creation efforts is in review with Raj. As concluded we would use the 2nd TA in agile teams that are running with two TA model for AR creation.

Currently, Team A and Team B are the two teams with 1 TA in agile team. Till we get the GAP filled we will have a stop-gap plan to start off with the effort.
  

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Hello train; 1. The first sentence is not grammatical. I cannot determine what the subject of the main clause is.

  • Hello train; 1.
  • The first sentence is not grammatical.
  • I cannot determine what the subject of the main clause is.
  • What is this subject of the verb "is"?
  • In continuation with the conversation on the GAPs in Agile teams based on Engineering capacity and AR creation efforts is i n review with Raj.
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Hello train;
1. The first sentence is not grammatical. I cannot determine what the subject of the main clause is. What is this subject of the verb "is"?

In continuation with the conversation on the GAPs in Agile teams based on Engineering capacity and AR creation efforts is in review with Raj.

2. I find it difficult to give you suggestions because I
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1. 2 - I corrected the grammar
TA- Testing Resource; AR- It is a Task.
I made the change you recommended.
3. I should have mentioned as "agile solutions"- Good Catch

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