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Sour and sweet Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Can this be a thesis statement about sports?

Sports have very healthy effect on our mind.I like to play table tennis.It has all the advantages of outdoor games
  

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Hello, sour and sweet - and welcome to English Forums. No, those sentences are too random to make a good thesis statement. ' clause.

  • Hello, sour and sweet - and welcome to English Forums.
  • No, those sentences are too random to make a good thesis statement.
  • ' clause.
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Hello, sour and sweet - and welcome to English Forums.

No, those sentences are too random to make a good thesis statement. The first sentence alone would make a better thesis statement if you add a 'because...' clause.

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