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Yobib Nartea Posted 12 years ago
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Can this be a good Thesis Statement?

cultural geographers focus so intently on identity construction and “othering” is because this process of dehumanization plays an important role in socially distancing those deemed “different”
  

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Cultural geographers focus intently on identity construction and “othering” because this process of dehumanization plays an important role in socially distancing those deemed “different ”. I don't understand your field, but this is better English.

  • Cultural geographers focus intently on identity construction and “othering” because this process of dehumanization plays an important role in socially distancing those deemed “different ”.
  • I don't understand your field, but this is better English.
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Cultural geographers focus intently on identity construction and “othering” because this process of dehumanization plays an important role in socially distancing those deemed “different”.

I don't understand your field, but this is better English.

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