Can teachers to check my poor english?

(This is for my presentation, so many grammar error)


Good morning to my lecturers and friends!
I’m May of class GD03. This is my second year third semester.


First, I want to show my Basic Advertising artworks. This subject is taught by Mr. Wong.
Here are some of my artworks.

This one is my Campaign poster. This poster is about for let human know don’t abandoned your pet.
Second one is my Redesign poster. And third one is my “Self Promotion” magazine cover.


Secondly, I want to show my Digital Photography artwork.
This subject is taught by Mr. Man.
I learn about Photoshop on this subject. He teaches us how to using software Photoshop, retouching photo and others.

Here are some of my artworks.
This is Retouching Magazine, Impossible Image & Digital Retouching.


Last, I want to show my Electronic Advertising artworks.
This subject also taught by Mr. Man.
Here are my TV Advertisement, is about the Samsung brand new mobile phone.
And here is my Internet Advertisement, I using Flash to make this Ad. This button can redirect to Samsung Official Website.
This is my Radio Advertisement. I use Sound Forge to make this radio advertisement.


Thank you!