Can sum1 check my motivation letter? PLS!

Hey, this is a corrected motivation letter, pls let me knw if it's alright or not, I might need to rewrite some phrases and i need to know! THANKS!

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is ........., I am .. years old and have completed my studies in a bilingual school in Spain, where I had the opportunity to learn both: English and Spanish.

I inform my desire to participate in the following program: .................... I believe that this program will give me the opportunity to link my past education and experiences with new studies in the hospitality field. I chose this program because the main factor of economy to many countries is tourism, this means that lots of countries depend on tourism and this is the case of Spain.

I chose Switzerland as a destination for my further studies as the roots of hospitality are there, and as we all know, hospitality is global, which is why I feel the necessity of going abroad to study and acquire both, theoretical and cultural knowledge. This program is a great opportunity for my professional project as ..... is an institution that stimulates the integration of studies and practice, which is very important. This means that I will gain experience and knowledge to return to my home place as an irreplaceable worker and become beneficial to my country.

The importance of college education is far more important today than it was ever before. Also, obtaining a good education gives you more opportunities when applying for jobs, and a proper college education enables the employer to judge your suitability for it.The global economy is becoming increasingly more competitive, and in order to prove that I can be beneficial, I want to give myself the chance to study in ...... – an Institute of Higher Education which will provide me knowledge and experience that I can’t receive from a secondary education.

To achieve my goals, I need a good education and I strongly believe that this is the right place; it has always been my dream to work in the hospitality industry because it allows you to interact with people from all around the world, learn to work under pressure and mainly because I enjoy communicating with people with different cultures, which is enriching; and making everyone feel comfortable the way I feel when I stay in a hotel. I have also gained experience at school, as for the Business subject we used to prepare food ourselves and then sell it to the rest of the students, where we had to examine different aspects such as the quantity of food, number of people selling and what price should be given to each product.

Personally, I am an organized person, motivated, hard-working and ambitious. I have learnt the values of teamwork and organization to accomplish tasks in time by helping my father in his business, which is very important as the program is specialised in BA and makes me believe that this experience will be very valuable in my studies as I have learnt to attend different customers and treat them well. I’m also looking forward to work in a restaurant next January and gain more experience as well as develop my French as I took it as a foreign language for my IGCSE’s and got a good grade. (A)

I am sure .... will provide me a high-quality education and industry experience through the internships. I am very interested and motivated to study at your university. Feel free to contact me at any time concerning additional queries or comments regarding my motivation.

Thank you for your consideration

Yours faithfully