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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Can someone reword these sentences?
Although it acts as a symbol of hope, their dream becomes futile in a society dominated by capitalism and racism.
Capitalism and racism’s corruption of the American dream creates a world inhospitable to dreams
The second one is my thesis, but i dont want to repeat "capitalism" and "racism" in a row.
Is there some way I can express my views on how In reality, dreams cannot exist in a land where it is corrupted by various things like capitalism and racism?
Capitalism and racism’s corruption of the American dream creates a world inhospitable to dreams
The second one is my thesis, but i dont want to repeat "capitalism" and "racism" in a row.
Is there some way I can express my views on how In reality, dreams cannot exist in a land where it is corrupted by various things like capitalism and racism?
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Anonymous Although it acts as a symbol of hope, their dream becomes futile in a society dominated by capitalism and racism. Before we can help, what does "it" (in "it acts") and "their" (in "their dream") refer to? Chris
- Anonymous Although it acts as a symbol of hope, their dream becomes futile in a society dominated by capitalism and racism.
- Before we can help, what does "it" (in "it acts") and "their" (in "their dream") refer to?
- Chris
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AnonymousAlthough it acts as a symbol of hope, their dream becomes futile in a society dominated by capitalism and racism.Before we can help, what does "it" (in "it acts") and "their" (in "their dream") refer to?
Chris
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Hi Anon: How about:
The American dream cannot be realized as long as prejudice and corruption prevails in society.
The American dream cannot be realized as long as prejudice and corruption prevails in society.
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