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Francesko Posted 14 years ago
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports avtivities as they give to their university libraries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
We all know that univiersities have extremely a large amount of books in their libraries for the student.
A world to knowledge.But personally I agree and I think that would be a good thing to give the same amount of money to their students activities.The bases for my views are health,social and financial.
In the health field.Students that will attend activities that the university have will make them more healthier.Will vanish their stress out.They will exercising in a group with their friends.Will encourage them to keep moving. And some of students that smoke cigarettes will quit that by attending university activities.Or some that going at the parties at the weekend and drinking alchohol.They will give it up to keep their body structure.A good reason to keep students healthier.
Socially,university life offers young people opportunity to form meaningful friendship,relationships and connections,some of which last for life.So attending activities in university by going to another university playing a friendly match in basketball will make them create connections and another circle of friendship.And another thing is that will make them work in group without differences.And in this way university may discover a lot of talents.
Lastly,from an financial prespective,if university creates a league for example a basketball league they can gain a lot of money by making a friendly match with other competitors through the tickets of the games.Or by having investitors in their league.Are many myriad ways by gaining money and their image by winning games and trophies.But all these activities depends and on the budget that university have for a year.
So personally I think that university should give the same amount to their students sports activities.
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We all know that univiersities have extremely a large amount of books in their libraries for the student.
A world to knowledge.But personally I agree and I think that would be a good thing to give the same amount of money to their students activities.The bases for my views are health,social and financial.
In the health field.Students that will attend activities that the university have will make them more healthier.Will vanish their stress out.They will exercising in a group with their friends.Will encourage them to keep moving. And some of students that smoke cigarettes will quit that by attending university activities.Or some that going at the parties at the weekend and drinking alchohol.They will give it up to keep their body structure.A good reason to keep students healthier.
Socially,university life offers young people opportunity to form meaningful friendship,relationships and connections,some of which last for life.So attending activities in university by going to another university playing a friendly match in basketball will make them create connections and another circle of friendship.And another thing is that will make them work in group without differences.And in this way university may discover a lot of talents.
Lastly,from an financial prespective,if university creates a league for example a basketball league they can gain a lot of money by making a friendly match with other competitors through the tickets of the games.Or by having investitors in their league.Are many myriad ways by gaining money and their image by winning games and trophies.But all these activities depends and on the budget that university have for a year.
So personally I think that university should give the same amount to their students sports activities.
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