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Xmastree Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Can someone review my Application please?

Hello guys.
Could someone please review my motivation letter for a job i am applying? (in terms of spelling, grammar and structure). As English is not my native language i want to make sure that the letter sounds ok Emotion: smile

Thank you for your efforts!

APPLICATION

This is my application for the ************ position advertised in ****** . I applied for this job to find a new experience in the environment of an airline industry, as it matches my knowledge, skills, abilities and interests. I am sure that this position will enable me to demonstrate my abilities making a contribution in an area I have studied and worked in.

I am currently studying ****** in ********, only having to finish the internship of the 4th course at the upcoming year. To be a valuable and productive asset to a company i work for, I decided to gain experience by working a half time job at my field of studies. Now I have a job experience preparing flight documentations and controlling operations of day to day cargo flights as an Airplane coordinator. Having a multifunctional job, I also got experience coordinating imports and exports, reviewing cargo movements, preparing documentations for trucks and working with internal tracking, management and data entry systems. In February 2016 I had an ***** course in Belgium to enlarge my knowledge and develop problem-solving skills.
I am an ambitious person with high level of responsibility, accuracy and motivation. I am a fast learner, always willing to learn new skills in order to enhance my abilities. I am well organized in my work, able to multi-task and pay attention to details.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration.
With kindest regards,
Anonymous.
  

Top answer

xmastree a job i am applyin g? a job that I am applying for ? When referring to yourself, always write a capital letter I .

  • xmastree a job i am applyin g?
  • a job that I am applying for ?
  • When referring to yourself, always write a capital letter I .
  • xmastree I applied for this job to find a new experience in the environment of an airline industry, I applied for this job to gain experience in the airline industry ,
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xmastreea job i am applying?
a job that I am applying for? When referring to yourself, always write a capital letter I.
xmastreeI applied for this job to find a new
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This is my application for the ************ position advertised in ****** . I applied for this job to find a new experience in the environment of an advance my career in the airline industry, as it matches my knowledge, skills, abilities and interests. I am sure that this position will enable me to demonstrate my abilities to make a contribution in an area I have studied

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