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After explored his historical making garment I believe, I was inspired and found Issey Miyake and me (a young developing artist) share a certainly similar visualize, when it comes to inquiry on fundamental questions about the natural of clothing would achieve, and Issey Miyake's works has always posed that evidenced of challenging moments , For examples in his "Making Things "book that occasion his exhibition shown at the foundations cartier pour I'artcomtemporain in Paris between 13 October 1998 and 28 February 1999.
  

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After explored his historical making garment I believe, I was inspired and found that Issey Miyake and me (a young developing artist) share a certainly similar visualize, when it comes to inquiry on fundamental questions about what the natural of cloth

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