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Ruttt Posted 13 years ago
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I think that all jobs are very important. Without fireman then, we will never be healthy and we won't be able to heal ourselves. Plus, who will take out the fire when they start?
Without police, who will protect us from the mean streets of life?
Doctor help people to live longer.
Gardner's work is important because make more beautiful's places.
Yes I agree that we should learn not to drop litter,but i think what not all people will do that for that we need a street cleaner.
I think what just professional fireman have to deal whit fire,because we can but us.
I think first the cameras have to work.
We need people like street cleaning and gardening because this day's people don't love the nature.
1.Do you think people should be paid more for doing a dangerous job?
The dangerous jobs I think will have to be more paid,because in the job you injure yourself and you don't know if this day you will back to home.
2. Would you like to have the same job/career for your whole life?
I this moment i think that i want to try a lot of works,because i don't know what i want to be all my life.
Do you think it's possible for anyone to become a police officer?
I don't think so, because if you are very slow ,not strong and have psychically demanding you will never catch the robber.
Without police, who will protect us from the mean streets of life?
Doctor help people to live longer.
Gardner's work is important because make more beautiful's places.
Yes I agree that we should learn not to drop litter,but i think what not all people will do that for that we need a street cleaner.
I think what just professional fireman have to deal whit fire,because we can but us.
I think first the cameras have to work.
We need people like street cleaning and gardening because this day's people don't love the nature.
1.Do you think people should be paid more for doing a dangerous job?
The dangerous jobs I think will have to be more paid,because in the job you injure yourself and you don't know if this day you will back to home.
2. Would you like to have the same job/career for your whole life?
I this moment i think that i want to try a lot of works,because i don't know what i want to be all my life.
Do you think it's possible for anyone to become a police officer?
I don't think so, because if you are very slow ,not strong and have psychically demanding you will never catch the robber.
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Here are some corrections (bold face). The yellow highlights show places that need attention. By the way, welcome to the Forums.
- Here are some corrections (bold face).
- The yellow highlights show places that need attention.
- By the way, welcome to the Forums.
- " I think that all jobs are very important.
- Without fireman then, we will never be healthy and we won't be able to heal ourselves.
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Here are some corrections (bold face). The yellow highlights show places that need attention.
By the way, welcome to the Forums. You will get more help if you use the "magic words."
I think that all jobs are very important. Without fireman then, we will never be healthy and we won't be able to heal ourselves. (What do firemen have to do with healing?) Plus, who will put
By the way, welcome to the Forums. You will get more help if you use the "magic words."
I think that all jobs are very important. Without fireman then, we will never be healthy and we won't be able to heal ourselves. (What do firemen have to do with healing?) Plus, who will put
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