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Urgenthelp Posted 17 years ago
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Can someone proofread this for me?
To To Whom It May Concern:
My name is ___ , and I am enrolled as an out of state, independent student.
I recently moved to California from New Jersey due to family.
My mother is a single parent that takes care of six siblings while working the night shift just to make ends meet.
Unfortunately, I am currently unemployed and I am seeking employment wherever it is available. Because of this,
I am unable to pay the $222 payment for the due date
I ask that the school give me permission to
postpone my due date payment and keep my classes held until i receive my financial aid.
My name is ___ , and I am enrolled as an out of state, independent student.
I recently moved to California from New Jersey due to family.
My mother is a single parent that takes care of six siblings while working the night shift just to make ends meet.
Unfortunately, I am currently unemployed and I am seeking employment wherever it is available. Because of this,
I am unable to pay the $222 payment for the due date
I ask that the school give me permission to
postpone my due date payment and keep my classes held until i receive my financial aid.
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Hi, Dear Sir or Madam, I am enrolled as an out of state, independent student. My student number is xxxxxx (if you have one). I recently moved to California from New Jersey for family reasons.
- Hi, Dear Sir or Madam, I am enrolled as an out of state, independent student.
- My student number is xxxxxx (if you have one).
- I recently moved to California from New Jersey for family reasons.
- My mother is a single parent who takes care of six chidren, while working the night shift just to make ends meet.
- Unfortunately, I am currently unemployed although I am seeking employment wherever it is available.
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Hi,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am enrolled as an out of state, independent student. My student number is xxxxxx (if you have one).
I recently moved to California from New Jersey for family reasons. My mother is a single parent who takes care of six chidren, while working the night shift just to make ends meet.
Unfortunately, I am currently unemployed a
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am enrolled as an out of state, independent student. My student number is xxxxxx (if you have one).
I recently moved to California from New Jersey for family reasons. My mother is a single parent who takes care of six chidren, while working the night shift just to make ends meet.
Unfortunately, I am currently unemployed a
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