Can someone proofread my motivations letter please

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in regards to my application for the MA in International Business at University X for the summer term 2019.

I have successfully completed my first university degree in Finance at University Z in May 2018, primarily focused on the teaching of finance-related processes using theoretical approaches but also on the basic principles of business administration. During my studies, I composed a bachelor thesis with the title "Eco Store", where I produced a real-life business plan for an eco-friendly, plastic-free grocery store. I extended my know-how by researching management literature and, in particular, I had the opportunity to apply an important set of management tools such as the SWOT analysis where I identified the strengths and weaknesses of the eco-friendly grocery store in order to determine its potential and feasibility.

As for my work experiences at company X, an international taxi company based in Greece, and company Y, which is a well-established local service consulting company, for which I was the Beirut project coordinator for the former, and a CRM manager for the latter. This gave me the chance to expand my knowledge particularly my managerial, marketing and the financial skill set and increased interest in learning the precise details of business development and strategic business planning. My work experience gave me the opportunity and privilege of meeting and expanding my network of multicultural friends and business acquaintances throughout the surrounding region and Europe. Mastering the three languages English, Russian and Arabic, I expanded my horizons and feel now ready to grasp the opportunity University X could offer me to become an active player in the international business scene.

During March this year, I have had the chance to visit Berlin and interact with some university students where I discussed their master degrees, whereby I came to highly appreciate the quality and educational depth of a Master in International Business. I have decided to pursue my studies in Berlin for it being a recognized world multicultural hub. University X is my choice since I am confident it can provide me with further specialized knowledge and environment to become an active player in the international business scene.

Finally, I am deeply convinced that this Masters being a necessity nowadays fits and complements my skills and aspirations, this choice being based on my personal work and educational history. My long term goal is to work in an international company and I believe this study program is what will help me reach my career goal with confidence and with a competitive and solid educational basis.

Yours faithfully,