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Prof. Q Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Can someone proof read this? Thanks.

Can someone read this and tell me if there are any grammar mistakes? thanks!

Our e-tailing site, www.BestBabyGear.com, specializes in only the very best products for parents of newborns, infants, and toddlers. Our website is award-winning and have a lot of best and steady selling products. If you visit our website to have a look, we will feel very pleased with it. By the way, while we continue to look for some goods to take occupy the pages of our website, I found that your products are good, well-built and classy and that you're extremely selective about the retail outlets. We have gotten all the products delivered to our customers within 3 days of ordering and our customer service is very systematic, so we never failed to satisfy our customers with the service. Once you start to do business with us, we will do our best to make your products, high quality strollers and chairs, be a top-drawer success, selling at least one hundred units per specific model per year. If you have any interest in retailing on our website, you can contact us any time by e-mail and by phone. We're looking forward to receiving your reply.
  

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Q—and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas and stricken out in appropriate verbiage. Please correct it and post your revised text here.

  • Q—and welcome to English Forums.
  • I have underlined some problem areas and stricken out in appropriate verbiage.
  • Please correct it and post your revised text here.
  • com, specializes in only the very best products for parents of newborns, infants, and toddlers.
  • Our website is award-winning and have a lot of best and steady selling products.
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Hello, Prof.Q—and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas and stricken out in appropriate verbiage. Please correct it and post your revised text here.

Our e-tailing site, www.BestBabyGear.com, specializes in only the very best products for parents of newborns, infants, and toddlers. Our website is award-winning and have a lot of best and steady s
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Thank you very much for your reply.
I have made some changes...Emotion: smile but I don't know what to do with the word classy..
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sorry, but can you check weird expressions as well?
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Our e-tailing site, www.BestBabyGear.com, specializes in only the very best products for newborns, infants, and toddlers. Our award-winning website has many of the most popular products, and we continue to look for new products that are attractive and well-built. We know that you are extremely selective about retail outlets.

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