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Csongi12xme Posted 11 years ago
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Can someone proof read this Cover letter?Thank you.

Cover Letter
Dear Hiring Manager;

I, the undersigned, Ienei Csongor Attila;
I am writing to express my interest in the IT Technician position posted on the IT Expert Facebook page.
I graduated from Colegiului Agricol “Traian Savulescu” with a degree as “Economic activities Technician”. After I graduated from high school I worked as a waiter and trough this profession I acquired certain personal and professional skills.
I am passionate about IT, especially about hardware and software troubleshooting and improving. My first achievement regarding this matter was installing an operating system on my personal computer at the age of 12. In the period that followed I have gained knowledge regarding computer hardware and software and troubleshooting techniques. I have implemented this knowledge on my personal and acquaintances computer, later on, from 2012 December until the present as a volunteer I provide computer troubleshooting services at client’s home. I desire to improve myself further in this field and obtain the certifications needed for building a career in IT.
Although I don’t have a certification in IT, and I have little experience, I would be a valuable employee due to my passion and vocation for this field.

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Dear Hiring Manager; I, the undersigned, Ienei Csongor Attila; I am writing to express my interest in the IT Technician position posted on the IT Expert Facebook page on June 11, 2015 . I graduated from Colegiului Agricol “Traian Savulescu” with a degree in “Economic activities Technician”. After I graduated from high school I worked as a waiter and through this profession I acquired certain personal and professional skills.

  • Dear Hiring Manager; I, the undersigned, Ienei Csongor Attila; I am writing to express my interest in the IT Technician position posted on the IT Expert Facebook page on June 11, 2015 .
  • I graduated from Colegiului Agricol “Traian Savulescu” with a degree in “Economic activities Technician”.
  • After I graduated from high school I worked as a waiter and through this profession I acquired certain personal and professional skills.
  • I am passionate about IT, especially about hardware and software troubleshooting and improving .
  • My first achievement regarding this matter was installing an operating system on my personal computer at the age of 12.
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Dear Hiring Manager;

I, the undersigned, Ienei Csongor Attila;
I am writing to express my interest in the IT Technician position posted on the IT Expert Facebook page on June 11, 2015.
I graduated from Colegiului Agricol “Traian Savulescu” with a degree in “Economic activities Technician”. After I graduated from high school I worked as a waiter and thro
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Are you going to attach your resume?
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Yes, only the Cover Letter has to be in two languages, romanian and english.
Thank you, AlpheccaStars.

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