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Yuiyui_girlfromchina Posted 19 years ago
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Impacts on One-child Policy
One-child Policy brings China both positive and negative impacts. It is a very important way to control the large size of population. Since the Policy started, the birth rate of China has been decreasing and dropped below 10% recently.
Since the population problem is controlled, it means that Chinese will not have to compete with each other for finding a job intensely because of the increasing number of the population. That makes lesser unemployment.
The polution problems will decrease because there are lesser people producing rubbish or waste.
The living condition will be better because China will not be too crowded as the population is not likely to increase.
One-child policy also brings us negative impacts.
Each Chinese family can only have one child, they prefer a boy to maintain the family bloodline. Therefore many female foetuses have been aborted and baby girls abandoned. There were 117 boys born for every 100 girls. It makes the gender imbalanced.
Since boys are more than girls, more and more boys can not find wives. It means that those men will not get any children. Lesser babies will be born but more old people are without any sons or daughters. It brings the aging problems.
The government stopped Chinese to born the second child. It is a kind of action that against human rights. Because human should have rights to born babies.
When each family get only one child, parents may give all their hopes to their only child or spoil he or she. If their child dies, the parents will be hurt seriously and the pain is unbearable.
China carries out the One-child Policy to control the population problem but it also brings many problems which are needed to be improved.
I'm from Hong Kong. I've just joined this forum. Nice to meet you all!=]
Can anyone help me to check my grammar mistakes from the essay below? Thanks a lot!
Impacts on One-child Policy
One-child Policy brings China both positive and negative impacts. It is a very important way to control the large size of population. Since the Policy started, the birth rate of China has been decreasing and dropped below 10% recently.
Since the population problem is controlled, it means that Chinese will not have to compete with each other for finding a job intensely because of the increasing number of the population. That makes lesser unemployment.
The polution problems will decrease because there are lesser people producing rubbish or waste.
The living condition will be better because China will not be too crowded as the population is not likely to increase.
One-child policy also brings us negative impacts.
Each Chinese family can only have one child, they prefer a boy to maintain the family bloodline. Therefore many female foetuses have been aborted and baby girls abandoned. There were 117 boys born for every 100 girls. It makes the gender imbalanced.
Since boys are more than girls, more and more boys can not find wives. It means that those men will not get any children. Lesser babies will be born but more old people are without any sons or daughters. It brings the aging problems.
The government stopped Chinese to born the second child. It is a kind of action that against human rights. Because human should have rights to born babies.
When each family get only one child, parents may give all their hopes to their only child or spoil he or she. If their child dies, the parents will be hurt seriously and the pain is unbearable.
China carries out the One-child Policy to control the population problem but it also brings many problems which are needed to be improved.
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Yuiyui_girlfromchina Impacts on One-child Policy One-child Policy brings China both positive and negative impacts. It is a very important way to control the large size of population. Since the Policy started, the birth rate of China has been decreasing and dropped below 10% recently.
- Yuiyui_girlfromchina Impacts on One-child Policy One-child Policy brings China both positive and negative impacts.
- It is a very important way to control the large size of population.
- Since the Policy started, the birth rate of China has been decreasing and dropped below 10% recently.
- Since the population problem is controlled, it means that Chinese will not have to compete with each other for finding a job intensely because of the increasing number of the population.
- That makes lesser unemployment.
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Yuiyui_girlfromchinaImpacts on One-child Policy
One-child Policy brings China both positive and negative impacts. It is a very important way to control the large size of population. Since the Policy started, the birth rate of China has been decreasing and dropped below 10% recently.
Since the population problem is controlled, it means tha
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