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Rina_navy Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
can someone plz check my letter and correct it for me...
(edited to remove personal information. Poster, it is not wise to put this sort of detail on an open forum)
11th January 2006
Dear Miss Jasmine,
With regards to the above mention matter, please accept this letter as a formal letter for me (Normarina xxxxxxxxxxxxx) to apply for a leave day for this coming Chinese New Year season commencing on 29th until 30th of January 2006. I will be back on duty on the 31st of January 2006.
I take this opportunity to wish everyone a very Happy Chinese New Year and success in the year of 2006.
Thank you for your cooperation.
With kind regards.
Yours faithfully,
11th January 2006
Dear Miss Jasmine,
RE: APPROVAL FOR LEAVE DAY
With regards to the above mention matter, please accept this letter as a formal letter for me (Normarina xxxxxxxxxxxxx) to apply for a leave day for this coming Chinese New Year season commencing on 29th until 30th of January 2006. I will be back on duty on the 31st of January 2006.
I take this opportunity to wish everyone a very Happy Chinese New Year and success in the year of 2006.
Thank you for your cooperation.
With kind regards.
Yours faithfully,
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Please accept this letter as a formal application for the 29th and 30th of January (Chinese New Year). I will be back on duty on the 31 st of January 2006. I take this opportunity to wish everyone a very Happy Chinese New Year and success in the year of 2006.
- Please accept this letter as a formal application for the 29th and 30th of January (Chinese New Year).
- I will be back on duty on the 31 st of January 2006.
- I take this opportunity to wish everyone a very Happy Chinese New Year and success in the year of 2006.
- Normarina ***) etc
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Please accept this letter as a formal application for the 29th and 30th of January (Chinese New Year). I will be back on duty on the 31st of January 2006.
I take this opportunity to wish everyone a very Happy Chinese New Year and success in the year of 2006.
Normarina ***) etc
I take this opportunity to wish everyone a very Happy Chinese New Year and success in the year of 2006.
Normarina ***) etc
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By this letter I am applying for Leave for this coming Chinese New Year, commencing January 29th, 2006. I will return to duty on the 31st of January.
Thanks for your assistance.
Sincerely,
Etc.
NOTE:
1. I would not use "cooperation" because presumably you are asking PERMISSION. Someone in position to DECIDE about this matter will render ASSISTANCE-----
Thanks for your assistance.
Sincerely,
Etc.
NOTE:
1. I would not use "cooperation" because presumably you are asking PERMISSION. Someone in position to DECIDE about this matter will render ASSISTANCE-----
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