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The proportion of the mercury and other heavy metals in shark fin is much higher than that of other fishes.
This is the result of industrial wastewater discharging into the sea, increases seawater heavy metal content, and thus affects marine organisms.
This is the result of industrial wastewater discharging into the sea, increases seawater heavy metal content, and thus affects marine organisms.
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The proportion of mercury and other heavy metals in shark fin is much higher than that in other fishes. This is the result of industrial wastewater discharging into the sea , which increases seawater heavy metal content and thus affects marine organisms.
- The proportion of mercury and other heavy metals in shark fin is much higher than that in other fishes.
- This is the result of industrial wastewater discharging into the sea , which increases seawater heavy metal content and thus affects marine organisms.
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The proportion of mercury and other heavy metals in shark fin is much higher than that in other fishes. This is the result of industrial wastewater discharging into the sea, which increases seawater heavy metal content and thus affects marine organisms.
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