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Confused, surprised, and discouraged are all the words that could describe my worst day ever. Starting off that night wasn’t no better, I felt as if my stomach was about to blow. Agonizing pain and ache was all that I felt, I began the day with normal brushing of the teeth, face wash, and the eyebrow routine. I thought it was going to be one of those days where I ignore my gut feelings type of thing but I was totally wrong.
I skip to the mid-day around one or two o’clock, I was rushed by my boss to get a series of items like baby formula, caned milk, and sometimes on occasion maple products for three stores. I admit that dashing credit card after credit card could get a bit tiresome, but it was money and no one gets between me and my money. I was out and about trying to accomplish my goal that my boss had set out for me. I was in a rush; I had my eyes like a hawk hitting every store that was on in site. There it was a H.E.B dead in my sight. In my mind it seemed as if I was like a

tracking missile ready to hit its target. I switched lanes like a boss as I hit intersection to go into the parking lot of H.E.B. I found it very hard to find a parking spot and I do admit that I was in a rush and for good reason. I had been in the Texas blazing heat where my skin was drench in sweat like silver back in forest for hours at a time. Retrieving items from certain stores like Randalls, H.E.B, Walmart, and on occasion Target my patience was already running low.
So my clock was ticking, I was ready to take a smooth dripping hot shower and calmly sit in front my fat 60 inch flat screen and watch Love of Hip-Hop. It’s just something about those big-booty girls on screen with all this drama that makes my eyes and ears block anything on the outside. Enough with the fantasy (smiles) my eyes focus on trying to get into a parking spot. There it was the box that would set me free. I pushed on the gas pedal and wrongly turned into the parking spot. I look over twice and seen that I overturned. In action I switched gears to reverse, I slowly turned my head like a turtle and back again. I thought I was secure because there was no one in sight so I backed up so I could position myself in the parking spot. This is where all hell breaks loose, a man in his senior days driving in a dark red BMW van decides to back up while my car is in movement and me looking in my rear view mirror I didn't see him coming. Like my day could not get any worse we collide.

Creating a boom-like sound, my fat sexy lips dropped to the floor on how disappointed and shocked I was. The only two things that were going through my mind were how mad my mom was going to be because I was in her favorite grey Toyota and how much damage was done. I slowly get out the car with a look of desperation because I was worried, and it was my first time getting into an accident. I didn't know what to do, but pick up the phone and dial those ten digits. I focused on what I was going say and the best thing I decided to do was tell the truth. I faced my fear and talked to her she had asked me simple questions “like are you OK Or how bad is the accident”? I quickly answered. I was told to exchange information and take a picture of the older man’s car so he couldn't say it was more than that because of recent scams on the news. In the end everyone was OK and the dusty old man was telling me stories about his past car wrecks, I guess it was to calm me down, but I did not really care about what he had to say I just wanted to go home.
All was set and done I drove home with both my hands on the stirring wheel and my eyes closely up on the front window like an old man. I learned from this experience that I could never be too hasty in doing what I needed to do and always be as nice and clam when getting into any incident.