Can someone please look this short paragraph over.. Please and thank you

The three similarities between this text and the Bible are that both deal with the creation Heaven and Earth or basically things like the sun, moon, and the stars, they both discuss the creation of man in very similar ways, and both texts have brothers who are torn between good and evil. First, in both texts they have similar theories on how Heaven and the Earth were created. The only difference is that in the Bible, it states that God created the heavens and the Earth. I interpret this to mean that God created everything including the stars, the sun, and the moon. Next, both text have similar ways in which man was created, it is so similar that in both texts they used clay material. Finally, in both texts, they have brothers one standing for everything good and the other everything bad. In the Bible, the brothers were Cain and Able.

These commonalities exist because almost every culture has created stories about how Earth was formed and how people came about. People have different experiences and go through different things. Most people have different culture, climates, and customs and are just telling the story from their view point, basically trying to add things that they go through. The stories are similar in many ways because they are trying to explain the same things, but are different because they have two different kinds of experiences. This would explain why the turtle doesn’t appear in the book of Genesis but appears many times in the story. I don’t think they have too many turtles in the Middle East. People also basically putting their own spin to how the people came about and how the Earth was created based mostly on their experiences.