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Vincent tee Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Can someone please help to rephrase sentences to my boss?

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00Can someone please help to amend 01b00my grammar02b00 and to 01b00give suggestion02b00 is this letter appropriate to my boss's question. Thanks alot 02br
01b00My Boss Question:02b02br
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01font00Is there anyone agree with you to work onsite other the normal working hours?02font02br
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01b00My Answer:02b02br
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01font00Actually nobody has instructed me to work onsite or offsite after normal working hours .I just took my own initiative to work around the clock and also on weekends to learn as much as possible and to produce deliverables above expectation by trying to achieve exact dateline on time. Even I tried to work till wee hours but I have not neglected my normally working hours. I am trying to push my ability to do more than my current job and by doing so, I am also making sure that I do not shrink my official job duties while taking on more.02font02br
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01font00Sometimes I think it is good for the top management to understand the subordinate's philosophy. I would like to share with you some of my personal philosophy…02font02br
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01font00I am working hard to broaden my horizons and to develop a host of skill sets that could be contributed to the organization and to the team for betterment.02font02br
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01font00To achieve great results, I think one has to change their mindsets01b00 from02b00 01font00“we work because we have to”02font00 01b00to02b00 01font00“we work because we want to”.02font02font02br
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01font00At the moment, work is not just a job to me, but it’s a hobby; a game; a business and its fun to work. With these we can go beyond the call of duty, take on added challenges and put in extra hours to achieve excellent results.02font02br
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0Are you really sure you want to say all this? You talk way too much about not neglecting your real job and it sounds like you're bragging about how much you work. I would suggest something FAR shorter: No one has asked me to put in the extra hours.

  • 0Are you really sure you want to say all this?
  • You talk way too much about not neglecting your real job and it sounds like you're bragging about how much you work.
  • I would suggest something FAR shorter: No one has asked me to put in the extra hours.
  • I did it on my own initiative so I could learn more and do more.
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0Are you really sure you want to say all this? You talk way too much about not neglecting your real job and it sounds like you're bragging about how much you work. I would suggest something FAR shorter: No one has asked me to put in the extra hours. I did it on my own initiative so I could learn more and do more. I really enjoy my job and want to develop my skills even more, even if that means w

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