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Cutie125 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Can someone please help me with building better understanding and flow in these sentences part of an essay?

1: As the refusal to negotiate continues between Israel and the Arab countries, the Palestinians Arabs attack the Israelis with help from Palestinian organizations.

2: The Saudi Peace Initiative created the negotiability of the issue. Although, this agreement can be made it may get affected.

Thank you.
  

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1: (While? ) Israel and the Arab countries continue to refuse to negotiate , the Palestinian Arabs attack Israel with help from Palestinian organizations. 2: The Saudi peace initiative created...

  • 1: (While?
  • ) Israel and the Arab countries continue to refuse to negotiate , the Palestinian Arabs attack Israel with help from Palestinian organizations.
  • 2: The Saudi peace initiative created...
  • [ I don't understand the rest of your sentence.
  • ]
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1: (While? / Because?) Israel and the Arab countries continue to refuse to negotiate, the Palestinian Arabs attack Israel with help from Palestinian organizations.

2: The Saudi peace initiative created... [ I don't understand the rest of your sentence.]

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