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One Night as Changed Our Life



When my childhood I had experienced a tragic life. On night that had changed my family and people life on the village. We live in the camp in the Palawan of the because we are refugee there. That big accident I will never forget in my life. I remember all the details in the accident happen. On that time I was 7 year old. I had see the big fired in my life I ever seen before. That fired made a lot people suffered. People lost their house and important things in their life were gone as well. It also made our family life up and down. Even though it been fourteen year but I still remember the entire thing in that night. I think that horrible accident will never fade away in my mind.



The accident happens on June 13, 1994 in the . That time I and my family were in the room and ready to go to bed. Suddenly I hear some voice from outside are screaming and said “Fire”. After I hear that I told to my mom. Mom did you hear something? She said she didn’t hear anything anything, so we try to silence and listen it. When we heard the voice toward us, we did mind at all. We though they just making up for fun. But suddenly we hear the voice louder and louder from outside. So we decided to check it out.



When I was outside, I see the big fire in the sky. I see people carry their stuff and moving around. My mom was frightened and told to her children “just stay here where you are and don’t go anywhere”. After she that she go back to the house to pack our stuffs. My brother was hugged his siblings because he was so scared that we are lost. On that moment I can felt how he so protected to his three siblings. I felt glad that I have a responsible brother like him. My mom was only one are packing out stuff because on that time my dad was in another city. It took like two to three hours to get there by plane. We were so scared because the fire getting to close to our house but my mom did out yet.



When my mom gone packing everything we all five people carry the stuff and run, but we didn’t know where to run to. In our village is near to the airport, so we run toward there. When we reached there we hugging each other and star to cry. I see lots people are screaming for help because they didn’t carry all the important things in their. Some people have nothing in their hand. They lost everything and all the money they had been saving for many years. After couple hours of fired, the firemen came. On that moment I was mad at them because they didn’t come when the fire started; how come they just came after the fire was stop?



We were lucky found the place to rest at night. My brother was smart he found the big room for us, while people were crying and stared at the fire. My brother goes to search the place. We sleep at the class room. After that accident all the class room people started to make the house to live. So that mean no school to young people goes to. The next morning I and my family go back to the place. All the thing had turn to ash. I saw some people are crying because all things had gone in one. We don’t know who to blame of this accident. All I know that we all save and no one are hurt from his accident. I’m glad that my family are save and survival this hardship. I know this horrible happen will never go away when I growing up.