Can someone please evaluate my essay.
The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education: Einstein. what does he mean by that and do you think he is correct.
From historical times, scope of education has been limited and schools are still following the same traditional trends, which has resulted in restricting the creativity and imagination of a child.
Every Student is evaluated on the basis of some specific subjects. However, some students might have different interests but due to the lack of flexibility in our education system they are not allowed to widen their knowledge scope or they do not even get much time to explore their interests.
Furthermore, parents also force their child to follow the defined paths as they are not ready to take risk. For instance, a student wanted to pursue his career in photography but his guardians did not allowed him to become a photographer, as they had not seen any successful photographer in their near ones.
However, parents should motivate the children to explore innovative things and school should introduce an option for students to choose the subjects of his own interests, rather than forcing him to learn standard ones.
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From historical times, (missing word) scope of education has been limited and schools are still following the same traditional curricula trends , which has resulted in restricting the creativity and imagination of a child. (You did not mention Einstein's name once. ) Every S tudent is evaluated on the basis of some specific subjects.
- From historical times, (missing word) scope of education has been limited and schools are still following the same traditional curricula trends , which has resulted in restricting the creativity and imagination of a child.
- (You did not mention Einstein's name once.
- ) Every S tudent is evaluated on the basis of some specific subjects.
- However, some students might have different interests but due to the lack of flexibility in our education system they are not allowed to widen their knowledge scope or they do not even get much time to explore their interests.
- Furthermore, parents also force their child (wrong form) to follow the defined paths as they are not ready to take risk .
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From historical times, (missing word) scope of education has been limited and schools are still following the same traditional curricula trends, which has resulted in restricting the creativity and imagination of a child. (You did not mention Einstein's name once. It is not clear that you answered the question: What did
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