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Lelo H Harun Posted 15 years ago
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Can someone please edit the Paragraph for me
im not done yet. just making sure that im on the right track....here is the para..
Freedom of religion has a limitation
I've recently been introduced to Jehovah's Witnesses religion. A religion that believes there is only one true religion which Jehovah's Witnesses. They believe that their translation of the Bible is the most accurate translation that exists in the world and all other translations are inaccurate. they believe that only Jehovah's Witnesses are truly saved and if you don't belong to their organization(the truth) then you're lost. An organization of volunteers working to earn a good deeds for the after life. This volunteers are sent out to go from door to door to deliver an urgent messages to people and they have to hear about it.....
Freedom of religion has a limitation
I've recently been introduced to Jehovah's Witnesses religion. A religion that believes there is only one true religion which Jehovah's Witnesses. They believe that their translation of the Bible is the most accurate translation that exists in the world and all other translations are inaccurate. they believe that only Jehovah's Witnesses are truly saved and if you don't belong to their organization(the truth) then you're lost. An organization of volunteers working to earn a good deeds for the after life. This volunteers are sent out to go from door to door to deliver an urgent messages to people and they have to hear about it.....
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Here are some suggestions: Freedom of religion has a limitation (better: its limitations) I've recently been introduced to the Jehovah's Witnesses religion , a religion that believes there is only one true religion which is Jehovah's Witnesses (repetitive) . They believe that their translation of the Bible is the most accurate translation that exists in the world and all other translations are inaccurate. T hey believe that only Jehovah's Witnesses are truly saved and if you don't belong to their organization (the truth) then you're lost.
- Here are some suggestions: Freedom of religion has a limitation (better: its limitations) I've recently been introduced to the Jehovah's Witnesses religion , a religion that believes there is only one true religion which is Jehovah's Witnesses (repetitive) .
- They believe that their translation of the Bible is the most accurate translation that exists in the world and all other translations are inaccurate.
- T hey believe that only Jehovah's Witnesses are truly saved and if you don't belong to their organization (the truth) then you're lost.
- An organization of volunteers working to earn a good deeds for the after life.
- ) have to hear about it.....
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Here are some suggestions:
Freedom of religion has a limitation (better: its limitations)
I've recently been introduced to the Jehovah's Witnessesreligion, a religion that believes there is only one true religion which is Jehovah's Witnesses (repetitive). They believe that their translation of the Bible is the most accurate
Freedom of religion has a limitation (better: its limitations)
I've recently been introduced to the Jehovah's Witnesses
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