Can someone please edit my thank you notes? Just one paragraph each.

I would really appreciate it if someone could please look over my thank you letters below. Please note that the second letter is different than the first. Thanks in advance.

Dear Mrs. Will,
I would like to thank you for taking your valuable time to interview me on May 4th, 2009. I enjoyed discussing my background and motivation for medicine with you. I appreciate you sharing your experience at Georgetown with me and making the interview experience informative and conversational. The Program left me very impressed with its strengths in training students in a supportive environment. After attending the interview day meetings and learning more about the MS Program, I feel reassured that my future plans coincide very well with the MS Program's goals.

Thank you once again.
Sincerely,

Dear Dr. Ibra,
I would like to thank you for taking your valuable time to interview me on May 4th, 2009. I enjoyed discussing my background and motivation for medicine with you. I appreciate you sharing about your interests in medicine and answering my questions about the MS Program. The Program left me very impressed with its strengths in training students in a supportive environment. After attending the interview day meetings and learning more about the MS Program, I feel reassured that my future plans coincide very well with the MS Program's goals.

Thank you once again.

Sincerely,

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