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0 I had to write a memo about some new guidelines for weekend employees. This is what I wrote: 02 br
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00 To keep our company a safe and worry free environment, there have been several guidelines enforced for employees who work on weekends. 02 br
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00 Employees should notify the security officer on duty of their arrival and departure. Offices will be locked until the arrival of employees. It is the employees' responsibility to be sure offices are locked again upon departure. This would eliminate the chances of having an entrance left unlocked. No one other than employees is allowed on the premises, which means no spouses, children, or friends may accompany employees to work on the weekends. 02 br
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00 If there are any problems, employees should notify the security officer on duty who will be making regular rounds of the company. 0-
02 br
00 To keep our company a safe and worry free environment, there have been several guidelines enforced for employees who work on weekends. 02 br
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00 Employees should notify the security officer on duty of their arrival and departure. Offices will be locked until the arrival of employees. It is the employees' responsibility to be sure offices are locked again upon departure. This would eliminate the chances of having an entrance left unlocked. No one other than employees is allowed on the premises, which means no spouses, children, or friends may accompany employees to work on the weekends. 02 br
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00 If there are any problems, employees should notify the security officer on duty who will be making regular rounds of the company. 0-
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02 br 00 Employees should notify the security officer on duty of their arrival 02 br 00 and departure. 02 br 00 It is the employees' responsibility to be sure offices are locked again 02 br 00 upon departure. This 01 font 00 will 02 font 01 del 00 would 02 del 00 eliminate the chances of having an entrance 02 br 00 left unlocked.
- 02 br 00 Employees should notify the security officer on duty of their arrival 02 br 00 and departure.
- 02 br 00 It is the employees' responsibility to be sure offices are locked again 02 br 00 upon departure.
- This 01 font 00 will 02 font 01 del 00 would 02 del 00 eliminate the chances of having an entrance 02 br 00 left unlocked.
- No one other than employees is allowed on the premises, 02 br 00 which means no spouses, children, or friends may accompany employees to 02 br 00 work 01 font 00 at 02 font 01 del 00 on the 02 del 00 weekends.
- If there are any problems, employees should 02 br 00 notify the security officer on duty who will be making regular rounds 02 br 00 of the company.
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0 To keep our company a safe and worry free environment, 01 del 00 there have been 02 del 02 br
00 several guidelines 01 font 00 have been 02 font 00 01 font 00 introduced 02 font 01 del 00 enforced 02 del 00 for employees who work 01 font 00 at 0
00 several guidelines 01 font 00 have been 02 font 00 01 font 00 introduced 02 font 01 del
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0 In the US, we use "on the weekend." In the UK, it's "at the weekend." 02 br
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00 I suggest you bullet the list. 02 br
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00 One issue is with "It is the employees' responsibility" -- which employees? When you leave it up to more than one person to do something, each may assume the other did it. You need to specificy which employee, or make it part of Secu
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00 I suggest you bullet the list. 02 br
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00 One issue is with "It is the employees' responsibility" -- which employees? When you leave it up to more than one person to do something, each may assume the other did it. You need to specificy which employee, or make it part of Secu
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