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Can someone please correct it..its urgent

After two week:-

Naina dialled riya’s number.. hey moti how are you??

Riya-Hello i am good jaan, you tell what’s goin on?

Naina-Everything is good here ..by the way did aman call you ?

Riya- hmmm naina i can understand your worries but i myself will tell you if i wil get any call from him you dont have to ask daily, and dont worry bhabhi..if he said that he gonna call you after a month then i am sure he will do so.he must be busy there.

Naina- yeah i know, anyways got any information about result

Riya- nopes and let me know if you’l have. okay and now dont think too much and just give a relax to your mind.

In the same way two months has been passed, but naina got no information from aman’s side, she anxiously waits for his calls but nothing positive was coming out of it.

Where are you aman? Its been two month since you have called me, you mentioned one month only. Lot of strange things are coming to my mind , atleats whatever problem you are having you must have called me once and tell me, you have no idea what i am going through here..every single day i am living with a fear that i might loose you. How can you be so careless ..and suddenly tears rolled on her cheeks. And then she saw papa coming to her room, she quickly acted like as if she is sleeping.

Naina’s father came to her and put blanket over her,and he kept his hand on naina’s head and then went out.

I am sorry papa i know this is not the first time i avoid you infact i am doing this from past few days, but i cant help it dad, i cannot show you my worries for aman because i know it will hurt you like anything...where the hell are you aman she murrmured in an irritated voice, because of you am not able to behave nicley with my parents, i dont know if you are even missing me or not.

After a week :-

Hey congrats you have scored good marks this year kalo..

Naina coudnt believe that what she just heard is the aman’s voice ..so she became blank for a while.

Hello hey u forget me or what?aman said

Naina- aman do you have any idea what have you done? You know i was so worried about you, everyday i was calling your friends, riya and everyone just to hear something from your side or about you but look at yourslef..Mr. Aman Hooda here you are ..calling me after 69 days and that is too without any hesitation..what the hell do you think yourself mahn!!!how can you do this to me.

Aman- hmmm hey i am sorry baby ..but i am calling you with a good news about your result.. you should be happy that you have scored so good marks, i am so happy for you.

Naina- yeah do you really think that your sorry is more than enough this time, everytime aman things cannot go according to you, what you were thinking that where will naina go?? She is a fool, obviously she is going to wait for me whether i will call or not right..i know that you have problems at your house but that doesnt mean Aman that you will completely forget me. when you said that i want one month time, did i say anything ?? tell me but i guess you are now taking me for granted..

Aman- i love you jaan..and i am extremely sorry but i had some big issues for which i really needed a time to sort it out, that’s why i dint call you.

Naina- once she heard i love you from aman then after she was not able to say anything to him and becomes silent. That’s ok aman .. by the way how are you?

Aman- huh finally you asked something about me..my god you were so angry..go and get a glass of ice water for yourself and smiled.

Naina- no aman but you cant even imagine how much i missed you damn it..i almost felt that now you will not gonna call me, and you left me..

Aman- this is not possible naina..i will never ever leave you, i will be with you always and forever, but i also have lot of other issues which are really essential to be solved. I got stucked between lot of things, but it doesnt mean that i dint miss you, there was not a single day when i dint do so, but circumstances did not let me to call you.

Naina- hey what happened? Is everything alright?

Aman- yeah okay somebody is coming i will call you later, bye and congrats for your result.

As aman hung up the phone Naina felt something strange but she was happy that again she got her aman back. She went to nandini and said di i got the result, everyone starts congratualting her.

Nandini- hmm so how are you feeling now, i am sure you are on cloud nine after aman’s call..and smiled.

Naina blushed and hugged her.

Next day:-

Naina got a call on her landline..

Naina i am downstairs of your house , come and meet me once, i really want to see you.

Naina- whht? Aman are you serious ?where are you?

Aman- come to your balcony and see where am i?, anyways i have no time naina, please come and meet me, i really want to talk to you, and its something urgent.

Naina- but aman, papa is at home and he will not allow me to go like this ..you just go i will meet you some another time.

Aman- naina please atleast try ..its important.

Naina- hmmmm i very well know what your important works are ..so you just go now i will meet you some other day please..its a request

Aman- naina but what if there would be no other day for us??you are not getting what i want to say..okay he took a deep breath and said naina when you going to marry me??

Naina- aman what happened to you? What kind of question is this i already told you that i cannot give you any kind of assurance ..let the things go on its own way and then later we will decide..

Aman- naina just yes or no..will you going to marry me..

Naina- amannnn why you being so stubborn?

Aman- naina i think i got my answer.. by the way thanks. And cut the phone

Naina said what happened to him now? She tried his number but got no response from him.

Aman’s Side:-

So what happened what did she say? Is she coming?Aman’s friend(Punit) who came with him asked

Aman- yaar she dint say anything, actually her father is there at house.

Punit-So what mahn you already told her that its urgent. i mean she could atleast come i guesss, it is not so difficult buddy, i mean you are coming all the way from your place just to meet her and she dint even bother to come down..i think she is not that much concerned for you as you are..you are unnecessarily going against of everyone just for this girl.

Aman- its not like that buddy..i know she loves me a lot but she cannot go against of her parents wishes, she loves them a lot..and is just i came all of sudden without even informing her so she is not able to manage.

Punit- think twice aman..the girl who is not able to come down and meet you after knowing the fact that its important and you are coming by so far place, what else you can expect from her. I know these kind of girls they are like this..i dont think she evn worth your efforts.

Aman- stopped punit, i dont want to hear anything about her, i know naina and she can never be wrong got it. So you better dont say anything about her.

Punit- ohkay..cool mahn! Its totally your matter but think before you do anything, i think what aunty want you should do.

Aman heard what punit said and went back to his place.
  

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