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Porsche714 Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

can someone please check out my paragraph, due tomorow

0questions: Tell how you feel about a cetain class you took recently then gives reason why you liked or disliked it.02br
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001-on the topic?02br
002-topic sentence? good setup?02br
003-organization?02br
004-good detail?02br
005-enough detail?02br
006-writing quality?02br
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00 00A class I took recently that I enjoyed was last semester Math010 with Mr. Zugates.00 02br
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00First he is one of the best yet funniest math professors I’ve taken at golden west college. He made the class really fun and worth going to for example when he makes a slight mistake he sometime say “oh here it goes Mr. Zugates is an idiot again”.00 00When we needed help he takes an advantage of his time to go over every little detail.00 00He also gives out fair amount of homework and quizzes, which helped me out in the long run.00 00I learned a lot from Mr. Zugates, what I learn the most is always take notes and never miss a day in class, that’s what I did and I passed it with a B.00 00Math is one of my worst subjects sometimes it drives me nuts trying to solve out a problem. In the end I did very well in his class even though I had no interest in math. I would definitely take him again if he teaches math30.0-
  

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02br 02br 00The writing quality is the most important factor. You need to improve it before you can do well in the other categories. 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01font 00 A class I took recently that I enjoyed was last semester 01font 00Math 01002font 00 with Mr.

  • 02br 02br 00The writing quality is the most important factor.
  • You need to improve it before you can do well in the other categories.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01font 00 A class I took recently that I enjoyed was last semester 01font 00Math 01002font 00 with Mr.
  • Zugates.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00First he is one of the best yet funniest math professors I’ve taken at 01font 00G02font 00olden 01font 00W02font 00est 01font 00C02font 00ollege.
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0Hi,02br
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00Welcome to the Forum.02br
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00The writing quality is the most important factor. You need to improve it before you can do well in the other categories. 02br
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00You can't join two sentences together just by not putting a period and a capital letter for the second one.02br
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00You need capital

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