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Tildetdouspart Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can someone please check my very short paragraph

My friends said that I am a very caring person, because of this personality, my family think I am a controlling person. Some of my friends appreciate what I do to them, but sometimes one will get jealous because she thinks I have been forgetting about her, that I only think about my other friends.

  

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) personality, (run-on sentence. Improper punctuation) my family think I am a controlling person. Some of my friends appreciate what I do to them, but sometimes one will get jealous because she thinks I have been forgetting about her, that and I only think about my other friends.

  • ) personality, (run-on sentence.
  • Improper punctuation) my family think I am a controlling person.
  • Some of my friends appreciate what I do to them, but sometimes one will get jealous because she thinks I have been forgetting about her, that and I only think about my other friends.
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My friends said that I am a very caring person, because of this (Which one?) personality, (run-on sentence. Improper punctuation) my family think I am a controlling person. Some of my friends appreciate what I do to them, but sometimes one w

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