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Ztq3 Posted 11 years ago
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Can someone please check my sentences

Please read the e-mail threads below regarding the March funds for XYZ. Also please read the attached e-mail for direct deposit form sent by ABC in January 2015. We just want to confirm that April funds will go to the right bank account.
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Please read the e-mail threads below regarding the March funds for XYZ. Also please read the attached e-mail for the direct deposit form sent by ABC in January 2015. We just want to confirm that April funds will go to the right bank account .

— Mister Micawber

  • Please read the e-mail threads below regarding the March funds for XYZ.
  • Also please read the attached e-mail for the direct deposit form sent by ABC in January 2015.
  • We just want to confirm that April funds will go to the right bank account .
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Please read the e-mail threads below regarding the March funds for XYZ. Also please read the attached e-mail for the direct deposit form sent by ABC in January 2015. We just want to confirm that April funds will go to the right bank account.
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Thank you Mister Micawber
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If I received an email like this that begins by asking me to read a lot of threads, I would be a bit irritated.

It's much better to begin by summarizing the issue for me and then telling me clearly what action you want me to take.

Clive
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