Can someone please check my letter

0This letter is for entering a Master's 02br
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00I would like to begin this letter with telling you a little bit about myself. 00My name is +++++. I am 24 years old and I finished my study in Social Psychology in September 2005. 00I always wanted to study Medicine but because of the difficulties involving the assignment by lot for aspiring Medicine students, I decided to study Psychology instead. This study was close enough to medicine for me. During my study I was very satisfied with my choice.02br
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00When I heard there was going to be a Master’s in Medical psychology I immediately got very excited and started collecting all the information I could find about it. This Masters is the most perfect blend of psychology and medicine. 02br
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00 00I decided to go to +++++ because the first draft of this study took place in 2006, a year after my graduation. I’ve worked there as a junior consultant for a small consultancy, as a teacher in social science and as a freelance project writer. Working on an island in different branches and settings has given me the opportunity to develop various skills that will be useful during this Master’s. One of the skills would be setting realistic and achievable goals and attend the process that leads to fulfilling those goals. 02br
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00I see the necessity there is for medical psychologist. Most of the patients who visit the doctor are suffering from complaints that are psychosomatic. In the +++++++ the high level of stress, due to the social economic situation, plays a big role in the development of these complaints. Upon finishing this Master’s I would be the only one00 ++++++00 working as a Medical psychologist. I would like to make a contribution to the society by helping to fulfill this need.02br
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00As I pointed out earlier I already have a Master’s degree in Social Psychology. Thereby I meet the requirements you asked. For a detailed list of my qualifications see the enclosure.02br
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00I would like to have00 00the opportunity to meet and further discuss my qualifications.02br
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00Yours sincerely, 0-