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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Can someone please check my introductory paragrah for gramatical errors?

The paragraph is a MLA formatted character analysis of the epic hero Beowulf.


Throughout time there has been a constant struggle between light and dark, good and evil, heaven and hell. This everlasting conflict is depicted most famously in Beowulf, a timeless Old English epic poem written in the Anglo-Saxon time period between 449 and 1066. The original creator is unknown, but was first composed by Christian monks after years of paganistic oral illustration. In Anglo-Saxon culture, along with literature, one not only had to be a strong, intelligent, and brave warrior but also show devout loyalty to his brethren. Beowulf embodies the quintessential Anglo-Saxon hero who sails the seas to a neighboring country to defend and gain fame by defeating seemingly impossible super-natural forces while showing his unparalleled god-like strength, bravery, and humility.
  

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  • Some suggestions: Throughout time there has been a constant struggle between light and dark, good and evil, Heaven and **** .
  • This everlasting conflict is depicted famously in Beowulf, a timeless Old English epic poem written in the Anglo-Saxon period between 449 and 1066.
  • The original creator is unknown, but it was first committed to paper by Christian monks after years of pagan oral transmission .
  • In Anglo-Saxon culture and literature , one had not only to be a strong, intelligent, and brave warrior, but also show devout loyalty to one's brethren.
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Throughout time there has been a constant struggle between light and dark, good and evil, Heaven and ****. This everlasting conflict is depicted famously in Beowulf, a timeless Old English epic poem written in the Anglo-Saxon period between 449 and 1066. The original creator is unknown, but it was first com

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