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Tildetdouspart Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Can someone please check my grammar.

I apologize for the bad manners and disrespect that you've seen in my house the other night. My children and I supposed to help one another taking care of their father, but I don't see this in our family. Your parents are very lucky to have a son like you. You are such a wonderful person and you deserve the best. I feel so little when I met some of your relatives because your family has a good relationships with your relatives.

Thank you,
  

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tildetdouspart I apologize for the bad manners and disrespect that you've seen you saw in my house the other night. My children and I are supposed to help one another taking care of their father, but I don't see this happening in our family. Your parents are very lucky to have a son like you.

— CalifJim

  • tildetdouspart I apologize for the bad manners and disrespect that you've seen you saw in my house the other night.
  • My children and I are supposed to help one another taking care of their father, but I don't see this happening in our family.
  • Your parents are very lucky to have a son like you.
  • You are such a wonderful person and you deserve the best.
  • I feel felt so little small when I met some of your relatives because your family has a such good relationships with your relatives.
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tildetdouspartI apologize for the bad manners and disrespect that you've seen you saw in my house the other night. My children and I are supposed to help one another taking care of their father, but I don't see this happening in our family. Your parents a
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Yes that's what I meant. Thank you so much CalifJim.
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Note that I added "are" before "supposed". I missed that the first time through.
CJ
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Hello CalifJim,
Can you please check if this is correct?

I met some of your relatives because your family has such good relationships with your relatives that my family do not have.

Thank you
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tildetdouspartI met some of your relatives because your family has
You met them because they had good relationships? There was no other reason to meet them? That sounds odd. Were you looking throughout the town for families with good relationships, and then trying to meet them because of that? I don't think that's what you mean.
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But
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Sorry the sentence was incimplete. I meant to say I felt so small when I met... that my family doesn't have.

Thank you CJ
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tildetdouspart I meant to say
Ah. In those cases, you can write "..." at the beginning of the fragment to show you're starting in the middle of a larger sentence. That should prevent the confusion. You can use this trick next time you need it.
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