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Ztq3 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Can someone please check my grammar

This check belongs to XYZ. Please cut a check payable to XYZ and mail it to our office attention to Jane Doe. Below is the ledger that shows the entries related to the check.

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This sounds like you are enclosing a cheque, and you want another one created as well. Do you really mean this? mail it to our office for the attention of Jane Doe.

— Clive

  • This sounds like you are enclosing a cheque, and you want another one created as well.
  • Do you really mean this?
  • mail it to our office for the attention of Jane Doe.
  • Try to avoid repeating the word 'cheque' 3 times.
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This sounds like you are enclosing a cheque, and you want another one created as well. Do you really mean this?

mail it to our office for the attention of Jane Doe.

Try to avoid repeating the word 'cheque' 3 times.
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I used "This" because I attached a copy of the check I received from other branch.
Thank you Clive
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I still don't understand. If you have a cheque, why do you want another one?

It's not important that I understand. It's important that the person you are writing to understands. Will he or she?
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I think he will understand because he sent me a copy of the cheque.

Thank you Clive
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