Can someone please check my grammar

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I was on vacation for six days since last Thursday. My husband and I planned to go to casino to watch the live show. I was contemplating if we should go or not. If we go, my husband will play cards, and I might be tempted to play the slot machine. My conscience has been whispering in my ears to not to go to casino, but at the same time I have been hearing to go to casino to have some fun.
Thanks again for all the help.

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Guess it would be better to say I have been on vacation ...

Anonymous · Answer

(The following revision is based on US usage.)

I've been on a six-day vacation since last Thursday. My husband suggested we go to a casino during my vacation, mainly for the show. I'm considering whether to go or not. If we go, my husband will also do some gambling at cards. If I play anything it will be the slots. But I'm having trouble with my conscience. It's telling me that gambling is not right and we should not go. But my husband and everyone else is telling me to go and have some fun.

Ztq3 · Answer

Thank you!

Can someone please check my grammar

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