Can someone look at my coverleter please?

Hey,

Can someon have a look at my cover letter? Any comments and suggestions are more then welcome.

Kind regards, and thanks,

Muerten

Cover letter:

Dear recruitment commission,

I would like to apply for the research position in social policy (reference number: XXX). I became acquainted with the research vacancy through the University of xxx website.

The educational record I present is one of going from practice to theory. After having received a BA in Social Work, I continued studying in the Masters in xx course, as such deepening my knowledge in social policy, in a European, comparative context.

My research experience thus far focussed on the gender topic and the influencing factors on the trade union strategy. In the performance of this research I conducted, analysed interviews (structured and semi structured), questionnaires and a content analysis of different magazines. This research experience has lead to experience in the usage of different research techniques, in qualitative and quantitative research.

The research in the reform of the National Health Service as a public service is an interesting research project in which I can make a valuable contribution. I am eager to learn and motivated to contribute to this project. Other foreign experiences (Finland, South Africa) thought me that I am flexible and persistent in getting the result desired. Next to this I am a team - player and easily to get along with.

Considering my qualifications, interest and motivation, I very much hope that you will consider me for the research associate in social policy position.

Yours faithfully,