Can someone kindly comment on the following person specification sentence for a job?

Successfully completing MSc International Public Health Nutrition and MSc Human Development & Family Studies makes me a very good match for this opportunity. Furthermore I am a regular member of British Nutritional Society. My dissertation involved forming questioners followed by in depth surveys from ethnic minorities having different native languages and analysing data using MS Office suite and SPSS proves my skills to overcome communication barriers in addition to strong IT expertise.