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Ztq3 Posted 10 years ago
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Can someone help me write a retirement invitation
I was asked at work to organize a lunch for a coworker who is retiring soon. Also to ask my coworkers if they want to contribute some money for a gift. I do not know how to start my e-mail. Can someone please proofread my short paragraph?
As you all know, Jane is leaving us soon to enjoy her retirement. We are going to have a farewell lunch for Jane on June 18th. We can either have a potluck or order some food and will just share the cost of food. In addition, everyone is welcome to contribute some money to buy a gift for Jane. Please share your thoughts and ideas about the farewell lunch and gifts. Thank you.
As you all know, Jane is leaving us soon to enjoy her retirement. We are going to have a farewell lunch for Jane on June 18th. We can either have a potluck or order some food and will just share the cost of food. In addition, everyone is welcome to contribute some money to buy a gift for Jane. Please share your thoughts and ideas about the farewell lunch and gifts. Thank you.
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It looks good to me. Hint: Secretly ask Jane's partner/best friend what she might like as a gift.
- It looks good to me.
- Hint: Secretly ask Jane's partner/best friend what she might like as a gift.
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It looks good to me.
Hint: Secretly ask Jane's partner/best friend what she might like as a gift.
Hint: Secretly ask Jane's partner/best friend what she might like as a gift.
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