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From time to time in our lives most of us find
ourselves moving. We might move into an apartment, or into a new house. Moving
can be one of the most grueling activities, aside from the fact that we are
picking up our lives, and changing into a new environment. Just the move itself
can be tiring with all the packing and lifting. Luckily, we don’t remember all
of this pain once we are settled into our new home. I remember just how painful
my most recent move was in August of 2006. Not only were we moving our entire
home, but also moving quite a distance across town. This increased the struggle
immensely compared to moving a short distance, yet the worst part of it was we
moved in the summer time when everyday is a hundred and ten degrees. Trying to
be smart about the move, we moved as much as we could in our cars days before
we did the big move with a moving truck. What we didn’t realize at the time was
that these smaller transports would tire us out quickly even before the day of
the big move came, primarily because of the heat and distance involved. We
learned our lesson trying to move as much as possible in just one trip. It has
now nearly a year and a half since we moved into our new home. I can’t remember
the last time I thought about how we suffered during those days, and am
thankful that the suffering of moving does not stay in my memory. Now we are
free to live happily in our new relaxing and comfortable home. No more packing
and lifting at least for a few more years!