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Jesienne Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Can someone help me with my personal statement???
my teacher made correction symbols on my ps. but I don't know how to correct these mistakes for sure.
run-on sentence:
1.Now with an enthusiasm to to teach people who aim to achieve high proficiency of English the priceless wealth of knowledge and share the panguage skills I have acquired throughout these years of study, I am applying to the Master of *** at *** university as my pursuit for further study in this area.
2. Now I have gathered some evidence to support the theories I read in books that once I doubted, which in a way, to help me revise the knowledge I learnt in the past while discover and create new materials by my own to improve the teaching quality.
Many thanks!
run-on sentence:
1.Now with an enthusiasm to to teach people who aim to achieve high proficiency of English the priceless wealth of knowledge and share the panguage skills I have acquired throughout these years of study, I am applying to the Master of *** at *** university as my pursuit for further study in this area.
2. Now I have gathered some evidence to support the theories I read in books that once I doubted, which in a way, to help me revise the knowledge I learnt in the past while discover and create new materials by my own to improve the teaching quality.
Many thanks!
Top answer
Jesienne: First, welcome to the EnglishForward! The way to correct run-on sentences is fairly straightforward. You separate the long run-on sentence into 2 or 3 shorter sentences, each with one idea.
- Jesienne: First, welcome to the EnglishForward!
- The way to correct run-on sentences is fairly straightforward.
- You separate the long run-on sentence into 2 or 3 shorter sentences, each with one idea.
- You can use transitional adverbs to retain the flow.
- In #2, it is not clear if you doubted the theories or the books.
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Jesienne:
First, welcome to the EnglishForward!
The way to correct run-on sentences is fairly straightforward. You separate the long run-on sentence into 2 or 3 shorter sentences, each with one idea. You can use transitional adverbs to retain the flow.
In #2, it is not clear if you doubted the theories or the books. From there on, the sentence gets even more obscure and un
First, welcome to the EnglishForward!
The way to correct run-on sentences is fairly straightforward. You separate the long run-on sentence into 2 or 3 shorter sentences, each with one idea. You can use transitional adverbs to retain the flow.
In #2, it is not clear if you doubted the theories or the books. From there on, the sentence gets even more obscure and un
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