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Devilsnight228 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Can someone help me to rewrite this sentence better? Does "as well as" need a comma before it?
I feel confident that I can come on board and quickly excel in this position because of these experiences, as well as my attention to detail and solid work ethic.
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It is kind of a run-on sentence. It reads much more professional as two sentences. Then you don't have to worry about a comma.
- It is kind of a run-on sentence.
- It reads much more professional as two sentences.
- Then you don't have to worry about a comma.
- I feel confident that I can come on board and quickly excel in this position.
- I have significant relevant and related experience, a proven work ethic, and am detail-oriented.
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It is kind of a run-on sentence. It reads much more professional as two sentences. Then you don't have to worry about a comma.
I feel confident that I can come on board and quickly excel in this position. I have significant relevant and related experience, a proven work ethic, and am detail-oriented. So I can hit the ground running.
I feel confident that I can come on board and quickly excel in this position. I have significant relevant and related experience, a proven work ethic, and am detail-oriented. So I can hit the ground running.
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