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Tiff dee Posted 14 years ago
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Can someone help me to check these grammar?

Dear customer,

You received this message because you have been shopped with us in the past 2 years,
as an appreciation, we are giving away "Discount Coupon" !,

This coupon will offer you 10% discount for all items, no minimum purchase require,
you can use it for our new launch T-shirt Store, I'm sure you will find something you may interest specially Doraemon T-shirt.

Coupon Code: dc102012

Question:How to use this coupon code?
Answer:
Just before you checkout, remember go to "Shopping Cart" on the top right corner,
select the radio button "Use Coupon Code", paste the coupon code inside, click "Apply Coupon" and then "Checkout"!

Notes: The coupon code will expire on 31th May 2012.
Thanks again for your support!

Emotion: thinking Do you find any grammar mistake inside?
  

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What is a 'radio button'? Dear customer, You are receiving this message because you have shopped with us in the past 2 years, and in appreciation we are offering you a discount coupon for 10% off of all items, no minimum purchase required. You can use it at our newly launched T-shirt Store, where we're sure you will find something of interest—perhaps our Doraemon T-shirt.

  • What is a 'radio button'?
  • Dear customer, You are receiving this message because you have shopped with us in the past 2 years, and in appreciation we are offering you a discount coupon for 10% off of all items, no minimum purchase required.
  • You can use it at our newly launched T-shirt Store, where we're sure you will find something of interest—perhaps our Doraemon T-shirt.
  • Coupon Code: dc102012 To use this code, j ust before you check out, go to the top right corner of your shopping cart and s elect the radio button "Use Coupon Code", paste the coupon code inside, click "Apply Coupon" , and then "Checkout"!
  • Please note that this coupon code will expire on 31 May 2012.
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What is a 'radio button'?


Dear customer,

You are receiving this message because you have shopped with us in the past 2 years, and in appreciation we are offering you a discount coupon for 10% off of all items, no minimum purchase required. You can use it at our newly launched T-shirt Store, where we're sure you
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hi, Mister Micawber,

Thanks for your help!

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