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TOOSMILEY Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can someone help me out..please

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01span00I am writing a reasearch paper on The Causes of Income Inequality and I need help with my thesis statement. This is what I have:02span02p

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01span01b00Although Income gaps are getting smaller, there are reasons why income inequality still exists in our society.02b02span02p

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01span00Please let me know if I am on the right track .Thanks in Advance02span02p

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0 A thesis statement should contain the answer to the question that your paper will elaborate on. It should also be very precise. 02br
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01font00Income Inequality still exsits in America due to low federal minimum wage, racial and gender discrimination, education and Technologial Advancements. 02font02br
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0 Yes, the thesis usually develops as the paper develops. I think this thesis is better than your previous one. But I hope someone else comments. I'm not an expert...0-
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0Good luck with finishing the paper! 050010id2
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You have to specify what reasons income inequality exist. For example, income inequality exist because politics favor the rich.
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