Can someone help me edit this recommendation letter? I am not so god in English

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I have been in contact with mr.XY ever since he enrolled for his …prog in..year. From day one, he has come across as a very hardworking and intelligent student. He took classes from me on…and earned excellent grades on those subjects. He has sound knowledge of his subject and possesses outstanding clinical skills
I had distinct pleasure of having ….in my classes. He is highly motivated and his apparent enthusiasm and interest in the subject is supported by his diligent work. He has always shown an extraordinary sense of perception of the subjects, and has made a difference to the classes with his insightful remarks during the group discussion sessions, which are a part of the course curriculum. In all his course activities, his grades have been above average and he stands in the top two percent of his class.
… has shown active participation in different extracurricular activities including dental health check up, free clinics and different community health service program. On inter-personal level too, ……..has endeared himself to his class-mates with his kind and compassionate nature.

I strongly recommend ….for pursuing his PG studies as I am sure he would be an asset to any department or university he joins.