can someone help me correcting letter of Motivation

0Having majored in Accounting and Information System as an 02br
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00I have obtained my BA degree at ***University,02br
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00during my study I have been to Austria for one year, where I have 02br
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00attended basic Accounting courses at *** in Linz. I have got more experienced and it helped me improve my English and German abilities. At that timeI have had a lot of advantages study abroad, I have improved my language knowledge rapidly and I became more independence and self-confidence.¨02br
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00That is why I chose to study abroad again. Due to study in Austria I have visited some other countries in Europe. In 2004 it was my first time to visit ***, and *** was the first city I arrived. I found I love this city immediately. After that I came to *** every year. Some of my friends who study in *** recommend me of ***, after inquiring the Master program that you offer, I found I have highly interest an it. I have a flexible attitude and I can work well in team or independently, which is so vital for this master’s degree. Besides, this program is an international program, I can know variety of students from different cultures, it can be a advantage for me.02br
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00My present work is as saleswoman in a Taiwanese company, our company export products to many countries especially European countries. My main customers are from Germany. Due to my job I have to contact with customers from Europe, It is very important to get further knowledge about Trading and international business. I would also like to study *** language at ***. As I know, some Taiwanese companies invest in *** because of the location and high quality of employee. Learning *** language can be my advantage to apply a job in a international company. My long-term goal is working in an international company and deal with other People from the world and creating efficient working styles in my field. Therefore, it is important to be well-prepared in many aspects, having language ability and getting knowledge of international business. 02br
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00I am confident that with my personality, experienced and academic background, I will have a solid foundation for a fulfilling career.02br
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00I hope that I will have the opportunity to prove my knowledge in the master’s program. I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application. Should you require further information of any kind, please contact me.02br
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00Yours faithfully,0-