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How to Find Probability using a Venn Diagram
Introduction
Have you ever been confused about the information you see in a venn diagram? The purpose of this report is to show the probability of voter participation in 2002 using data from a venn diagram. First, we have to find the probability of registered voters who voted in Michigan in the 2002 gubernatorial election. Additional, we have to find the probability that a voter chosen at random did not vote for a Democratic representative in the 2002 election. This essay will be explaining the processes that we had to go through to find the answers to these problems. Initially, we will describe the graph and then look for the probability of the venn diagram problems.
Graph Explanation
To begin with, we had to find the probability of a random registered voters who voted in the 2002 gubernatorial election and the probability of a voter chosen at random who did not vote for a democratic representative in the 2002 election. By examining the data in the graph, we found out that 3,219,864 registered voters voted and about 3,577,429 registered voters did not in Michigan 2002. In the next question, 33,865,154 people voted for a democratic representative and 39,979,372 did not. The organization that presented the graph about the the Michigan 2002 gubernatorial election is the Michigan Department of State. Furthermore, Federal Election Commission is the organization that put forward the data about the number of people who didn’t vote for a Democratic representative in 2002 . As stated earlier, the graph that we are using in these problems are venn diagrams.
Probability
After knowing all the information about these two problems, we then had to do some calculations to find the probability of each problem. To find the total of the amount of registered voters in Michigan, we had to add the amount of registered voters who voted and those who didn’t vote together, which came up to 6,797,293. Afterwards, we divided 3,219,864 which is the total amount of registered voter who voted by the total amount. The result was 0.47 and to find the percentage, we had to multiply that by 100. Therefore, the probability that a registered voter in Michigan voted in the 2002 gubernatorial election is 47% and this shows that forty-seven out of a hundred registered voters voted in the 2002 gubernatorial election. Similarly to the first problem, to find the total for the people who voted for and against a Democratic representative, we had to add the total number of people who voted for them and those who didn’t vote for them together and we got 73,844,526 as the total. Contrary to the first problem, we had to divide the amount of people who did not vote for a Democratic representative by the total, which is 39,979,372 divided by 73,844526 and the answer was 0.54. After we multiplied the answer by 100, the probability that a voter chosen at random did not vote for a Democratic representative is 54%. This result means that fifty-four out of a hundred people did not for a Democratic representative in 2002. As you can see from the information above, the two problems we were given are slightly different from each other because the first problem stated that we should find the probability of people who voted in the Michigan’s 2002 gubernatorial election and the second problem stated the complement, which is to find the number of people who did not vote for a Democratic representative.
Conclusion
This paper attempted to explain how to find the probability of voter participation in some elections that took place in 2002. In this project you learned how to read a graph with population,data,source, and sample size and the specific graph we learned about was a venn diagram.. The graphs we examined show how many registered voters participated in Michigan state in the 2002 gubernatorial election and how many votes did not vote for a Democratic representative. About 3,219,864 people voted in the 2002 Michigan gubernatorial election and 3,577,429 didn’t vote, so the probability of this issue is 47%. In addition, 33,865,154 voters voted for a Democratic representative while 39,979,372 voters did not for a Democratic representative. We found out that the probability that a random voter did not vote for a democratic representative is 54%. In conclusion, we hope that everything we have explained in this report has helped you in identifying how to find probability using a venn diagram.